Also, I really, really liked that ficlet. The thought of Anko coming to Sasuke to theoretically try and make it okay for him but really be there to make it okay for her is awesome.
Tiny nitpick: you switch pov in right towards the end, and it really throws the reader out of the flow of the story.
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Date: 2009-10-17 06:23 am (UTC)Word. Not that you looked stupid, but you shouldn't have to /try to hide behind someone else's style.
Also, the thought of Itachi and Shinsui starting a fight club makes me lol so hard. Because seriously, ninjas? they're beating up people IRL - if anything, they'd like, be really subversive and outé and start a knitting or a scrap-booking club.
Also, I really, really liked that ficlet. The thought of Anko coming to Sasuke to theoretically try and make it okay for him but really be there to make it okay for her is awesome.
Tiny nitpick: you switch pov in right towards the end, and it really throws the reader out of the flow of the story.