GANKED FROM HUNGRYTIGER11

[elementalhero]

Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you one thing I knew, learned, or wondered about while writing the story that didn't make it onto the page.

And/or, as a bonus:

Give me one of my own stories, and a timestamp sometime in the future after the end of the story, or sometime in the past before the story started, and I'll write you at least a hundred words of what happened then, whether it's five minutes before the story started or ten years in the future.


do it up~

Comments

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I learned: that I should have more confidence in my own writing style.

Word. Not that you looked stupid, but you shouldn't have to /try to hide behind someone else's style.

Also, the thought of Itachi and Shinsui starting a fight club makes me lol so hard. Because seriously, ninjas? they're beating up people IRL - if anything, they'd like, be really subversive and outé and start a knitting or a scrap-booking club.

Also, I really, really liked that ficlet. The thought of Anko coming to Sasuke to theoretically try and make it okay for him but really be there to make it okay for her is awesome.

Tiny nitpick: you switch pov in right towards the end, and it really throws the reader out of the flow of the story.

[okroginator.livejournal.com]

if anything, they'd like, be really subversive and outé and start a knitting or a scrap-booking club.

omg I should write that *A* But yeah, the fight club thing got scrapped fast because lol, dumb.

you switch pov in right towards the end, and it really throws the reader out of the flow of the story.

Are you takling about the ficlet, or Insomniac itself?

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

In the ficlet. I just wanted to give you a heads up if you ever decided to repost it.