elementalhero | in a perfect world, all the geeks get the girls~

I finished my latest short story for Creative Writing! It's called Breathing by Proxy, and it's about a future in which rich people that don't want to get drafted have themselves illegally cloned so the clones can fight for them. It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted it, but I'm hoping some advice from my teacher can help me clean up the slow patches.

I should be working on my request fics, but...I think I'll go play Baldur's Gate 2: Shadows of Amn instead. (SASUKE HATES VAMPIRES SO MUCH RIGHT NOW, ARRGH BODHI)

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DORKFACE EDIT: BODHI'S DEAD, BUT NOW I HAVE A BUG THAT KEEPS ME FROM RESURRECTING HAER'DALIS. AAAAAAAAARGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH I NEED MY BARD, DAMMIT!