One Last Meme...
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digthenym :
Okay, flist, time to get constructive and critical... but nicely, please.
Pick one piece of fanfiction I've written. I'll tell you one thing I didn't like about it, one thing I did and one thing I wish I would have done differently. Then, you give me one thing you didn't like, one thing you liked and one comment about it. The comment can be a question or in general remark or whatever you want. Post this in your journal so I can do the same.
digthenym :Okay, flist, time to get constructive and critical... but nicely, please.
Pick one piece of fanfiction I've written. I'll tell you one thing I didn't like about it, one thing I did and one thing I wish I would have done differently. Then, you give me one thing you didn't like, one thing you liked and one comment about it. The comment can be a question or in general remark or whatever you want. Post this in your journal so I can do the same.
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Date: 2009-07-02 01:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-02 11:57 pm (UTC)Not too sure I liked the Madara and Zetsu scene; their voices were hard to pin down. I didn't like the way I wrote it.
One thing I liked
The "forward" segment ("Forward. [...], the only direction you can be sure of is forward."). It's a motif/theme. And it's gonna be a DAMN GOOD ONE.
One thing I'd do differently
It's written in past tense, but lately, I've been getting very good at present tense. I wish I could go back and redo it all in present tense. But I won't now that I've started it. >C
(BTW, Nym, I have a beta for this story, but I could always use a third or fourth opinion on anything and everything to make sure it's top quality. Do you want to help beta it?)